#NaPoWriMo – Day 28: “Olivia”

 

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Olivia // by Jennifer Patino

 

At first sight,
a pale baby bird,
soft-spoken,
eyes tearing up
with empathy,
heart-spilling,
hands grasping
for empty air
in interrogation rooms
where there’s
never enough room
to breathe

 

20 years later,
a mother hawk,
a shining matron badge,
a hard edge to your voice,
its tone matching eyes
that have now seen
too much,
hands steady,
gripping a bad man’s neck,
but only inside a mind
that’s running out of room
to care too much

 

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* Author’s Note : It took me a few months, but I’ve finally seen every single episode of Law & Order: SVU. I could probably write a hundred poems about Olivia Benson, but this one’s a start.

 

 

14 thoughts on “#NaPoWriMo – Day 28: “Olivia”

    1. I started watching marathons on USA. I would watch it as it aired, but I’d take years off from it. I just got a Hulu, so I went back & watched all the ones I didn’t see or couldn’t remember. It’s been on for forever!

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  1. You ended the poem solidly. I admire your use of language and appropriate tone. My favorite lines:
    “hands steady,
    gripping a bad man’s neck,
    but only inside a mind
    that’s running out of room
    to care too much”

    Liked by 1 person

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